tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post8837032925380508005..comments2023-06-09T03:41:28.042-07:00Comments on chatoyance: EnjambmentLori Witzelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04744273435691506484noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-20159516477412997602007-09-01T07:29:00.000-07:002007-09-01T07:29:00.000-07:00This poem is incredible - nudge me, snag me, slow ...This poem is incredible - nudge me, snag me, slow me. The description of time is brilliant and the end - wow. Thank you.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12153878171712341666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-66830963481805697602007-08-30T16:06:00.000-07:002007-08-30T16:06:00.000-07:00"winged iris shutters and tracksunsequenced grace,..."winged iris shutters and tracks<BR/>unsequenced grace,<BR/> where nothing lacks."<BR/><BR/>That's you -- with your camera<BR/><BR/>(and isn't this one of the famous poetic rhythms ?)chris millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09575033275184403015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-18010993393918186152007-08-30T12:46:00.000-07:002007-08-30T12:46:00.000-07:00Tasty! Good to see you posting some original lines...Tasty! Good to see you posting some original lines. That kind of dense poem can be difficult to pull off, but I think you manage it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-85720352053125236872007-08-30T08:31:00.000-07:002007-08-30T08:31:00.000-07:00Wow, Lori. I've been tending my sick partner (now ...Wow, Lori. I've been tending my sick partner (now getting better at long last) this past month and missed lingering at your site (though I flitted quickly through sometimes).<BR/>This poem is lovely.<BR/>And I so like how you are matching/evoking poems with your photographs.<BR/>Thank you.jarvenpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04709417058741577802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-43841187251805774072007-08-30T05:21:00.000-07:002007-08-30T05:21:00.000-07:00I've been so grateful to dip into poetry every day...I've been so grateful to dip into poetry every day, along with your incredible photographs, but your poetry is the richest, most delicious.<BR/><BR/>This one, just like your poem about the bees, gets me where it really counts. I hope that makes sense. <BR/><BR/>THANK YOU. (That's the important part of this message.Reya Mellickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13076092659507965666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-38140424686550897062007-08-28T18:30:00.000-07:002007-08-28T18:30:00.000-07:00Tabbified image and tasty lines, Lori.Easy to musi...Tabbified image and tasty lines, Lori.<BR/><BR/>Easy to musicate this one, if you decide to.<BR/><BR/>Like Leonard Cohen meets Tori Amos having coffee with Lucy Kaplansky.<BR/><BR/>John :)John Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04015745054968415825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-41929355971806211912007-08-28T16:48:00.000-07:002007-08-28T16:48:00.000-07:00...and past the beauty of the image and the words ......and past the beauty of the image and the words I'm left with a question. What do you suppose those four new metal fasteners are holding up on the other side of the door?Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12773667447659795825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-39883036043100044562007-08-28T08:50:00.000-07:002007-08-28T08:50:00.000-07:00Wow again! Your sonnets are astounding. I can hear...Wow again! Your sonnets are astounding. I can hear someone writing music for this one.<BR/><BR/>Not to mention how well it goes with the photo. A new word for me -- enjambment. Door jamb, I knew. Maybe I did hear the word before but it didn't sink in.<BR/><BR/>The door is various shades of Payne's Gray, one of my favorite watercolor colors. I did a series in Payne's Gray in late summer of 2002. Payne's Gray when applied thickly looks like black. When applied thinly, it can be shades of grey and even blue, depending upon the company that makes the paint. I think the Winsor & Newton brand is the one where Payne's Gray looks blue when it is watered down.amhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09212213177713917828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19290845.post-475218005097443552007-08-28T08:48:00.000-07:002007-08-28T08:48:00.000-07:00"...burning back/ dream chaparral..."Difficult to ..."...burning back/ dream chaparral..."<BR/><BR/>Difficult to decide whether this image or that damned wonderful door is the more memorable.<BR/><BR/>This post is a cyber service ace.lowenkopfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05198658136254028258noreply@blogger.com