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Wednesday, November 29, 2006

Peak experiences story, <150 words

Out of the chute

—all the rosin in the world will do no good unless the wrap’s tight, sumbitch pinned my leg, rock rock rocking good he’s moved—

“Okay.”

One
Something shines, sky or fence, piledriving but he’s
Two
rolling now big gator rolls like to get me hung up
Three
no way I’m going down in the well you sumbitch
Four
spinner spin but I got hold of you, don’t you fade
Five
sky now blur now spin tight into my hand pull
Six
fight it fight dammit change direction change don’t
Seven
snap me back no DQ not this time almost got you
Eight
covered—

—glad to see arena dirt if I get all eight seconds, score could put me in some money but there’s easier ways to earn it’s something else that gets you in and out of that chute.

4 comments:

Ed Maskevich said...

yee-haww, you ride 'em cowgirl!

MB said...

I can smell it! Well done!

Kristen Robinson said...

Lori I love this I am right there waiting for the next moment, the next movement WOW.

Dave said...

Brava! (Love the hybid form.)